Tuesday, January 28, 2014

Poem: The Magical Musical Cylinder















Here is another treasure from Meredith. Please excuse this Wikipedia excerpt. I did do more research, but this seems to sum it up nicely.
Phonograph cylinders were the earliest commercial medium for reproducing sound. Commonly known simply as "records" in their era of greatest popularity (c. 1888–1915), these cylinder shaped objects had an audio recording engraved on the outside surface which could be reproduced when the cylinder was played on a mechanical phonograph The competing disc-shaped gramophone record system triumphed in the market place to become the dominant commercial audio medium in the 1910s, and commercial mass production of phonograph cylinders ended in 1929.
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 The character, Mildred, and the setting, New York City, flew into my mind when I looked at this amazing case for a cylinder. The next step, I thought, was to research life in 1900’s New York City.  I still may write that story someday because the idea of research, immersing myself in that historical period of time, appeals to me. But I was stumbling on the story, caught up in the details of what Mildred’s kitchen looked like and how she, an aging spinster, had enough money to live on. That didn’t seem to be the story clambering to get out, and I was stuck. Then today, while listening to various songs deemed “soft rock,” I was taken with the amazing poetry of some of their lines. Later, I read a one page short story, “The Frog Prince,” in the New Yorker that is one of the most creative and unusual pieces I’ve read in a long time.  This fanciful little piece broke all bonds of reality. No frantic research for authenticity, the author simply crafted a story of his liking—no restraints of time or possibility. So, while going about my daily routine, my brain combined the poetry of the music and the freedom of the fantastical short story and, voila! I realized that, for now, the cylinder story should not be a typical short story, but rather, a poetical characterization of Mildred. I very rarely attempt poetry because I’m not good at it and do not know how to improve. That doesn’t matter now. It’s a done deal. The Magical Musical Cylinder simply has to be more like a poem than prose. Mildred wants me to give the world a glimpse into her spirit as she dances to Thomas Edison’s Concert Band rendition of Razzazza Mazzazza (1905). Perhaps later I’ll do the research, and Mildred will tell her story in well-researched historical fiction. Dear Reader, Please take a moment to listen to Edison's Razzazza Mazzazza online. All the recordings I listened to are very short (1-3 minutes), but they are all treasures. How do you like the poem that was born of this research?

The Magical Musical Cylinder

Spinning around with the music,
making circles as grand as her cramped tenement room will allow
in her five layers of brazen lace petticoats discreetly hidden
beneath her long, modest skirt and sensible apron.

Phonograph scratching out its lone melody,
metallic and short-lived.

To the ragtime rhythm of Edison’s Razzazza Mazzazza,  
Mildred’s feet fly
as she soars breathlessly, waiting for her suitor
of forty years
who never comes.

For two airy pulsating minutes, she dances
and twirls
in innocent revelry.
Her heart opening to tender possibilities.

The music stills, and Mildred replaces the enchanted tube
in its hallowed, soft-lined casing
where it safely rests,
waiting for another solitary dance.